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PostPosted: Mon 21 Apr 2014 10:58 pm 
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Hi All,

Hoping that some fellow Irish folk with a better mastery of the mother tongue can perhaps aide me avoid inscribing a poorly chosen translation of a poem excerpt, as a tattoo. The excerpt/tattoo is to be as follows,

"Always remember, the hills ahead
Are never as steep as they seem"


Currently I am working with the following translation,

"Cuimhneamh i gcónaí, is iad na cnoic romhainn
riamh chomh géar mar is cosúil leo"


But sadly beyond, that I seek/need to defer to someone with a mastery "ag caint as Gaelige" to either refine or completely overhaul it. Any help will be much appreciated.

Go raibh maith agaibh,

Cainneach


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PostPosted: Mon 21 Apr 2014 11:11 pm 
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cainneach wrote:
Hi All,

Hoping that some fellow Irish folk with a better mastery of the mother tongue can perhaps aide me avoid inscribing a poorly chosen translation of a poem excerpt, as a tattoo. The excerpt/tattoo is to be as follows,

"Always remember, the hills ahead
Are never as steep as they seem"


Currently I am working with the following translation,

"Cuimhneamh i gcónaí, is iad na cnoic romhainn
riamh chomh géar mar is cosúil leo"


But sadly beyond, that I seek/need to defer to someone with a mastery "ag caint as Gaelige" to either refine or completely overhaul it. Any help will be much appreciated.

Go raibh maith agaibh,

Cainneach


Cuimhnigh go deo nach bhfuil na cnoic (or na sléibhte) amach romhainn chomh géar is a cheapfá.
But I'd leave the "always remember" and "ahead of us" out completely. So -
Níl na sléibhte chomh géar is a cheapfá.
The mountains are not as steep as you might think.

If you want Hills use "na cnoic".

Wait for better suggestions and/or spelling corrections.

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PostPosted: Tue 22 Apr 2014 3:51 am 
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Bríd Mhór wrote:
Cuimhnigh go deo nach bhfuil na cnoic (or na sléibhte) amach romhainn chomh géar is a cheapfá.
But I'd leave the "always remember" and "ahead of us" out completely. So -
Níl na sléibhte chomh géar is a cheapfá.
The mountains are not as steep as you might think.

If you want Hills use "na cnoic".

Wait for better suggestions and/or spelling corrections.

Tweaking, perhaps:

Cuimhnigh nach mbíonn na sléibhte amach romhat chomh géar is a cheapfá.

or

bhíonn na sléibhte amach romhat chomh géar is a cheapfá.

If we were to use romhainn, I'd use a cheapfadh muid/a cheapfaimis

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PostPosted: Tue 22 Apr 2014 7:21 pm 
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Excellent! Thanks guys for the feedback, much appreciated :)

ps. will be trying to use "cnoic" where possible


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PostPosted: Tue 22 Apr 2014 8:06 pm 
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Breandán wrote:
Bríd Mhór wrote:
Cuimhnigh go deo nach bhfuil na cnoic (or na sléibhte) amach romhainn chomh géar is a cheapfá.
But I'd leave the "always remember" and "ahead of us" out completely. So -
Níl na sléibhte chomh géar is a cheapfá.
The mountains are not as steep as you might think.

If you want Hills use "na cnoic".

Wait for better suggestions and/or spelling corrections.

Tweaking, perhaps:

Cuimhnigh nach mbíonn na sléibhte amach romhat chomh géar is a cheapfá.

or

bhíonn na sléibhte amach romhat chomh géar is a cheapfá.

If we were to use romhainn, I'd use a cheapfadh muid/a cheapfaimis


:good:

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I speak Connemara Irish, and my input will often reflect that.
I will do an mp3 file on request for short translations.

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