Combining the story and the notes was a good improvement.

There is only one small thing that I think should maybe be changed: The notes for each section simply say "Notes". To find out which section the notes are referring to, you have to turn back to the section of the story that precedes the notes. I think it would be a little easier for learners if each section of the notes showed which chapter the notes are referring to; so, the notes for the first part, for example, could be called "Notes for Cuid a haon" or "Cuid a haon – Notes" or just "Notes (1)" or something like that. This might not seem very important, but I think any little thing that might help learners get through this story more easily is a good thing.

By the way, I just finished Cuid a naoi to-day, so I'm now officially ready to get started on Cuid a deich. In the meantime, I'll be taking another look at the first 9 parts of the story to make sure that I didn't forget anything.

Hi guys,

I´m on holidays at the moment and I´ve had difficulty getting a good internet connection. I
actually have all the notes finished (all sections), since I´ve had so much free time, but
I´m typing this from a tourist office, so I can´t upload them. At the latest I´ll have them
up on the 13th when I get back. Apologies for the delay!

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The dialect I use is Cork Irish.
Ar sgáth a chéile a mhairid na daoine, lag agus láidir, uasal is íseal

Thanks for the update, Lon Dubh.

I'll be ready to forge ahead with Cuid a deich on the 13th, le cúnamh na ndéithe.

Bain taitneamh as do laethanta saoire, a chara!

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looking forward to it, I am just back from holidays myself!

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… ahem … cough, cough … cuid a deich … cough …

There's a bit of a conflict in the file when I compile it (due to putting story and notes together) I was just going to stick up Cuid a deich until I fixed it, but since it's so short I fixed the issues with Cuid a haon déag as well. So here is the both of them. I'll put in the rest of the story and the remaining notes when I fix the issues, probably later this week, possibly tomorrow if I'm quick enough.

The Story and Notes.

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The dialect I use is Cork Irish.
Ar sgáth a chéile a mhairid na daoine, lag agus láidir, uasal is íseal

I've put in your suggestion about heading names WFM and also Cuid a dó dhéag is in.
The whole file will probably be finished later today.

The Story and Notes.

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The dialect I use is Cork Irish.
Ar sgáth a chéile a mhairid na daoine, lag agus láidir, uasal is íseal

That's great!

Now it's time for me to roll up my sleeves and get to work on Cuid a Deich.