Hi. Nice effort.
Here are some pointers:
Mavwyn wrote:
Is Meiriceánach agus máthair mé.
Irish spelling generally follows the rule
caol le caol agus leathan le leathan "slender with slender and broad with broad". This means that consonants and consonant clusters will usually have either slender vowels (i or e) before and after, or else broad vowels (a, o, or u) before and after, but not usually a mixture. This means that
Meiriceánach needs that
e to keep the
c slender.
Mavwyn wrote:
Tá mé ag foghlaim na Gaeilge agus innealtóireachta meicniúla.
I would remember
ag foghlaim na Gaeilge "(at the) learning (of the) Irish" as a set expression. It's the way I have always heard it, anyway.
The objects of verbal nouns are in the genitive case, hence
na Gaeilge "of the Irish language" and
ag foghlaim innealtóireachta meicniúla "(at the) learning (of) mechanical engineering (I am not too sure of my genitives so that may need confirmation). The dictionary form of "mechanical engineering" is
innealtóireacht mheicniúil.
Mavwyn wrote:
Tá mé ag éisteacht le Raidió na Gaeltachta. Tá mé ag léamh ceacht Gaeilge.
The object of the Irish verb éist is indicated by
le, i.e.,
ag éisteacht le rud, similar to English "listen
to something".
Mavwyn wrote:
Nach bhfuil siad go maith?
I am not sure what the
siad is referring to in this sentence. If it is meant to be ceacht "lesson" then it should be
sé and if "Irish" is intended then it should be
sí. If you meant "lessons" in the previous sentence, then that should have been
ceachtanna.
Irish adjectives are only modified when attributive, so
maith wouldn't change here, but in the predicate maith becomes
go maith. Unlike Welsh, this only happens for a handful of Irish adjectives.
Mavwyn wrote:
An bhfuil sibhse ag foghlaim na Gaeilge?
Since you are contrasting someone else's situation with your own, Irish adds an emphatic suffix to the pronoun, turning
sibh into
sibhse.
Mavwyn wrote:
Tá an aimsir tirim agus fuar. Tá an aimsir go hálainn, freisin.
Like
maith,
álainn becomes
go hálainn in the predicate. Normal adjectives like
tirim and
fuar don't.
Mavwyn wrote:
Tá m'iníon ag teacht ón scoil anois. Slán agat!
You need
tá here and
mo changes to
m' before vowels and sometimes before
fh (which is silent).
Hope this helps. Please don't hesitate to ask for clarification.