Redwolf wrote:
Annabeth wrote:
Could you possibly break down the reason's you'd make the changes? I think I'm only lost because you're applying Grammar rules I am not familiar with.

For the most part, it's a question of dialect.
Redwolf
Not really, (though Lughaidh adding dialect twists on top certainly doesn't help).
What Lughaidh is trying to say is that once the intervening sentence structure becomes complex (or even just longish) you have to add
le (Connacht and Ulster) or
chun (Munster) to indicate the purpose.
Another way of putting it is that you can get by without
le or
chun in a shorter sentence but not a longer one.
It's a bit like English requiring "to" if you change the word order in the following sentence:
I sent Brian a letter.
but
I sent a letter to Brian.
I am not sure that Redwolf's sentence is actually wrong so much that it might be clearer with
le.