I've got to take credit for that typo – I always get this one mixed up because 's is used for the possessive in every case (that I can think of) except for "it's".

Yeah, "then" definitely makes sense in this sentence.

Alas, life is never that easy.

In Munster it's also le n-ithe and le n-ól so you just spotted another typo! Lon Dubh's notes are shaping up nicely thanks to our proofreading, eh?

Thanks for the corrections guys! I've included them and the additional explanations WeeFalorieMan requested.

Aislingeach, I've put in a Roman font version for you.

Here are the links again:
The Notes.
The Story.

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The dialect I use is Cork Irish.
Ar sgáth a chéile a mhairid na daoine, lag agus láidir, uasal is íseal

How very kind of you! I truly appreciate your thoughtfulness! But you needn't take the time for that. Like WFM, I dislike reading from a screen, so I made a hard copy of all 14 parts from the Corkirish web site, so I'm all set. And, as usual, your notes are fantastic!

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Táim ag foghlaim Gaelainn na Mumhan

Tá fáilte roim nach aon cheartú!
I am a learner. Any translations offered are practice and should not be used unless confirmed.

I just spotted a few more typos:

5. (d) … Ceannaímís … (page 1)

Faigheann is used in both cases. (the top of page 5)

Also, on page 5, number 3, the "t" in Tabhair should be capitalized because all of the first words in the other phrases (for number 3), in Irish and English, are capitalized.

On page 6, the English translation of Do rugas an gadhar chun siúl should be in italics.

A misspelling on the bottom of page 6: changeling – er … I won't bother mentioning why I think the story is referring to a changeling rather than a worthless person.


I'm pretty sure that there aren't any more typos. When all of this is corrected, your notes for Part 1 will be perfect.

p.s. Okay, this isn't really a typo, but I thought that I should mention this anyway. It looks kind of funny to have Cuid a haon right next to the number 2. Maybe it might be better not to number the Introduction so that Cuid a haon will have a 1 next to it, and Cuid a dó will have a 2 next to it, and so on – just an idea.

Here's the corrections with a few additions. WeeFalorieMan's numbering is included and a little intro on the Aos Sidhe.

The Notes.
The Story.

I'll add in part 2 tomorrow.

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The dialect I use is Cork Irish.
Ar sgáth a chéile a mhairid na daoine, lag agus láidir, uasal is íseal

Lon Dubh, the notes really look GREAT now with the cover page and the info about the Aos Sidhe!
It was a brilliant idea to put a picture of Sliabh na mBan bhFionn itself on the cover page. I've always been very curious to see these exotic places that I read about.

I sure hope that I'm not pestering you (ag ciapadh, an ea?) with all of my proof-reading, but I just found another typo:
On the title page (page 1), it should be Sliabh

Sin a bhfuil agam.

Both files updated for Cuid a dó. This one isn't too hard going.
The Notes.
The Story.


Oh certainly not! What a ridiculous thing for me to misspell, the title itself!

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The dialect I use is Cork Irish.
Ar sgáth a chéile a mhairid na daoine, lag agus láidir, uasal is íseal

Well, you've got nothing to worry about. I'll be going through everything with a fine-toothed comb!

If all goes well, I'll be starting Cuid a Dó to-day.

Corrections made to the files, including one that David Webb over at the Cork Irish website was kind enough to point out.

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The dialect I use is Cork Irish.
Ar sgáth a chéile a mhairid na daoine, lag agus láidir, uasal is íseal

Maith thú, tháid na nótaighe go hiontach agat!

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