Hi. This has been done here before (and over at IGTF countless times):
viewtopic.php?f=8&t=460The original quote is from Lord of the Rings:
"All that is gold does not glitter,
Not all those who wander are lost;
The old that is strong does not wither,
Deep roots are not reached by the frost."
In the other thread we ended up with:
Ní bhíonn chuile fhánaí ar strae "Not all those who wander are lost" literally "Not every wanderer is lost".
Now, what you have isn't wrong but the above refines it somewhat:
ní bhíonn is used more for generalizations;
níl more for specific cases.
chuile is a contraction of
gach uile =>
'ach uile =
'chuile. It is the preferred form in Connacht. Munster tends to use
gach aon. Ulster tends to use
achan (from
gach aon) but also uses
chuile. The standard often just uses
gach.
caillte also means "lost" but it also means "fallen, dead" so some of us prefer
ar strae "astray".