Here you go:

Cúán Fithise notes.

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The dialect I use is Cork Irish.
Ar sgáth a chéile a mhairid na daoine, lag agus láidir, uasal is íseal

Go raibh maith agat! I'll get to work on it right now.

What I like about Munster is the delivery it's patterns produce in the reader -a strong, masculine sense of genuine earthiness

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Still moving right along with Cuid a dó …

I found a few typos:

Den scéal:
Bhíodar ag féachaint [space] ar a chéile …
Chonnacadar an rí féin ina shuí ar fhuairmín … i ngátar uisge na Life agus a bhí aghaidh aon duine …

Then, in the next sentence:
Bhí circín idir a lámhaibh aige.

Then, in the next sentence:
… bhí cliath ag Conghal á chur le cois na circe.

Desna nótaí (page 8):
Sin é cúis … Appears here in a past tense form …
Sid é This is
Is é seo This is
B'shid é This was/would be.
B'é seoThis was/would be
Ní fios dom … (Am I right on this one?)

page 9:
Because these notes are in the same order as the story (which, by the way, is a very good idea), the Téanaidh oraibh explanation should be after the notes on Láthair.

Cé dhó go mbeimíd á dtabhairt … Literally: Who (is it) to him which we will give them.

Do leath a súile ortha Their eyes opened wide (with astonishment).
Do leath a mbéile ortha Their mouths opened wide (with astonishment).
In these two sentences it might be better to put "with astonishment" in brackets since they're not part of the actual literal sentence.

Dar leo They reckoned; Or so they thought (it might be okay to add "it seemed to them" or "so it seemed to them")
Cliath A splint

By the way, it was very helpful that you added the following 2 definitions; they are much closer to the original Gaelic and for me, this made it a lot easier to understand – instead of trying to puzzle through "standard" English:
Tá an cath tar éis dul i ndéine The battle is after becoming violent
Bhí an Life tar éis dul i ndísg The Liffey was after drying up (Personally, I'd have said something like "The Liffey was after going dry")

Sin a bhfuil agam anois.

Thanks, I've incorporated your suggestions and translations, including the one for Bhí an Life tar éis dul i ndísg.

You're right about Ní fios dom, although the details of Ní and what it does are a bit complex, I'll put them in the notes to the next section. It's simple in Cork, but more complex in Kerry.

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The dialect I use is Cork Irish.
Ar sgáth a chéile a mhairid na daoine, lag agus láidir, uasal is íseal

One quick question:

Does fuairmín have an epenthetic vowel?

No and the r is broad, i.e it is really fuar-mín. I've updated it's definition in the notes, since I didn't give its exact definition.

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The dialect I use is Cork Irish.
Ar sgáth a chéile a mhairid na daoine, lag agus láidir, uasal is íseal

I found one other typo in Cuid a dó in the 2nd sentence of the 2nd to the last paragraph:
Do leath a súile ortha.

I'm ready for Cuid a trí now.

Keep up the good work lads!

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