Beannachtaí daoibh, a dhaoine ón bhFóram Gaeilge! Ba mhaith liom a fhógairt go bhfuil greannán gréasáin nua díreach foilsithe agam ar WEBTOONS. “An Deoch Draíochta” an t-ainm atá air. Tá nasc curtha ar fáil agam thíos. Féach air agus tabhair dom bhur dtuairimí agus moltaí, le bhur dtoil!
(Greetings people Of the Irish Language Forum! I wish to announce that I just published a new web comic on WEBTOONS. It is called ’The Magic Drink’. I have provided a link below. Please check it out and give me your impressions and opinions!)

https://www.webtoons.com/en/canvas/an-l ... I2Udi8sR-g

I would say the Irish should be in a consistent style. D'éalaíos in one sentence and then chonaic mé in another. That alone means, for me, that it is not worth reading further. What dialect are you trying to write in? You should pick a dialect (and definitely not the made-up Caighdeán Oifigiúil) and write in that, and make sure you get a native speaker of the dialect to check things over.


'Sé rud adéarfainn féin ná gur cirte cómhréir chothrom a bheith ar a' nGaelainn agus gan bogadh ó chanúint go canúint eile idir abairtí difriúla. Tá "d'éalaíos" in abairt amháin agat, agus ansan "chonaic mé" (=DO CHONAC) in abairt eile. Agus ciallaíonn san, im chás féin ar a' laíghead, ní fiú é ' lé' níos sia. Cad í an chanúint go bhfuil iarracht agat á thabhairt ar scrí' inti? Ba chóir canúint a thoghadh (agus, ar do bháṡ, ná toibh a' Caighdeán Oifigiúil - rud do cheap coiste foghlamóirí i mBleá Cliath) agus bheith a' scrí' sa chanúint sin, agus féach chuige go léighfidh cainnteóír dúchais na canúna san tríd síos é chun deimhin a dhéanamh de de réir a' chanúnachais.

HOLY CRAP THIS IS AMAZING!! You are a very talented person... I'll definitely be tuning in for each episode!!

Shalom agus go raibh maith agat

I like the idea. A terrible spell

I wonder if this phrase is correct:


tóir is used here as a verbal noun.
But I’d think, tóir (hunt, pursuit) is just a common noun, sa tóir orm could be used instead.

The pronoun is á here: hunting him?
Probably the phrase should mean "(I …) [who is being] hunted by …"
But in this case, the pronoun should be first person (do mo thóraíocht ag or similar).

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Sásta gur maith leat é msv133. Bígí ag súil: ní éiríonn an scéal ach níos fearr!
(Glad you like it msv133. Stay tuned: the story only gets better!)

Are you saying bígí ag súil means "stay tuned" in Irish? Who told you that?

Ag súil le - means something.
Ag súil - what does this mean?