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PostPosted: Thu 25 Oct 2018 11:34 am 
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Dia dhaoibh a dhaoine.

Táim ag iarradh smaoineamh gearr-scannáin a scríobh as Gaeilge.

Scríobh mé é i mBearla ar an chead uair ach tá mo Gaeilge fairly basic and Google translate seems to have literally translated rather than what people would actually say.. So ní raibh mé cínnte den ghramadach agus cúpla focail odd.

Más bhfeidir aon duine throw a súil over it beidh mé an-appreciative.

Chuir mé isteach an Ghaelige agus an mBearla.

GRMA!
:GRMA:
Agus tá brón orm for an wall of text.

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Croí, a story of Tom Crean. Inspired by the man himself and the Heroic Age of Antarctic Exploration. Croí shows a short and difficult moment in a vast white landscape of difficult moments that was the Terra Nova Expedition.

After a struggle with the Antarctic elements and a man driven mad, Tom bursts into the relative safety of the wooded cabin that is One Ton Depot. One man, William Lashly, being dragged on a sled behind and another, Brendan Evans (semi-fictional), under his arm.

Evans, driven mad from a multitude if ailments, is mortally wounded and has just attempted to kill Crean. Tom has tried his best to save him regardless, not holding the man truly accountable for his actions. They talk, in Irish, of family, desires, expeditions, failures, the Call etc.

In a last moment of lucid madness, Evans tries once more to kill Tom, trying to preserve his heroic image and legacy, before dying himself. Tom is left badly injured and must turn to a knife and a fire to try seal the wound.

He passes out with the pain. Not knowing if he’ll ever wake again. Darkness. In a world of white.

He hears a voice. Ellen. She calls him back. ‘Tomás. Tomás, teacht ar ais chugam. Tomás!’

His eyes open. As we hear the faint shouts of men outside the cabin.

End

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Croí, sceál de Tomás Ó Croidheáin. A spreag an fear féin agus an Heroic Age of Antarctic Exploration. Taispeánann Croí nóiméad gearr agus deacair i dtíedhreach mór, bán de chuimhneacháin deacra a bhí an Expedition Terra Nova.

Tar éis streachailt leis na gnéithe Antartach, agus fear tiomáinte dúsachtach, pléascann sé i sábháilteacht an cábáin adhmaid, One Ton Depot. Fear amháin, William Lashly, á thatrraingt ar sled taobh thiar de, agus fear eile, Brendan Evans (leath-fhicseanúil), faoina lámh.

Evans, tiomáinte dúsachtach ó ailmentí éagsúla, le díobhálacha dona agus tá sé díreach ag iarraidh a mharú Tomás. Rinne Tomás iarracht é a shábháil gan aird, gan a bheith freagrach as a chuid gníomhartha. Labhraíonn siad, i nGaelige, ar theaghlaigh, ar mhianta, ar thuraus, ar theipeanna, ar an nGlao etc.

In aon nóiméad deireanach de lucid madness, déanann Evans iarracht Tom a mharú arís, ag iarraidh a íomhá agus an oidreacht laochra a chaomhnú, sula mbás sé ag fáil bháis. Gortaítear Tomás go done agus caithfidh sé dul chun scian ar an tine chun an créacht a shéaladh.

Téann sé amach leis an bpian. Gan a fhios aige má dhúisigh sé arís. Dorchadas. I saol bán.

Éisteann sé guth. Ellen. Iarranm sí air ais. ‘Tomás. Tomás, teacht ar ais chugam. Tomás!’

Oscail sé a shúile. De réir mar a chloiseann muid na labhra ciúin de na fir amuigh den chabáin.

Deireadh
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GRMA arís!


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