Hello,

I am planning on getting a tattoo in Irish and paid for a professional translator service online, however they did not indicate dialects and I don't think it is correct. I would greatly appreciate it if someone could review the translation and help me in this matter. Please, if you wouldn't mind reviewing the following.

"With a spine of steel and a roar like thunder, I will rise."

The professional service gave me the following translation:

"Agus dromlach cruach agam agus búir thoirniúil asam, éireoidh mé."


Thank you very much for your time!

"Agus dromlach cruach agam agus búir thoirniúil asam, éireoidh mé."

It says "Having a steel spine and emitting a thunderous roar, I will rise."

I don't think it is too bad considering that you inevitably have to change some grammar between languages ...

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WARNING: Intermediate speaker - await further opinions, corrections and adjustments before acting on my advice.
My "specialty" is Connemara Irish, particularly Cois Fhairrge dialect.
Is fearr Gaeilge ḃriste ná Béarla cliste, cinnte, aċ i ḃfad níos fearr aríst í Gaeilge ḃinn ḃeo na nGaeltaċtaí.
Gaeilge Chonnacht (GC), go háraid Gaeilge Chois Fhairrge (GCF), agus Gaeilge an Chaighdeáin Oifigiúil (CO).

Thank you so much! I greatly appreciate your expertise and time. Is there anything I can do to improve the translation?

Looks okay to me. Would anyone else like to weight in on this? Have I missed anything?

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WARNING: Intermediate speaker - await further opinions, corrections and adjustments before acting on my advice.
My "specialty" is Connemara Irish, particularly Cois Fhairrge dialect.
Is fearr Gaeilge ḃriste ná Béarla cliste, cinnte, aċ i ḃfad níos fearr aríst í Gaeilge ḃinn ḃeo na nGaeltaċtaí.
Gaeilge Chonnacht (GC), go háraid Gaeilge Chois Fhairrge (GCF), agus Gaeilge an Chaighdeáin Oifigiúil (CO).

I think it is perfectly nice.
Ending the sentence with 'mé' feels undesirable to me in a poetic way. I would have tried to avoid it. But I think that is just a personal thing. You can enjoy it as is

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Thank you all very much!