Tattoo Request in Irish Gaelic

"The sun will rise and fade your bruises"

Your translations are much appreciated!

Perhaps:

Éireoidh an ghrian do chuid bruanna a mhaolú. "The sun will rise to lighten your bruises."

Await correction or confirmation ...

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Múinteoir Gaeilge - Irish Teacher
My "specialty" is Connemara Irish, particularly Cois Fhairrge dialect, but I can also speak Ulster and Munster Irish with native-level pronunciation.
Is fearr Gaeilge ḃriste ná Béarla cliste, cinnte, aċ i ḃfad níos fearr aríst í Gaeilge ḃinn ḃeo na nGaeltaċtaí.
Gaeilge Chonnacht (GC), go háraid Gaeilge Chois Fhairrge (GCF), Gaeilic Uladh (GU), Gaelainn na Mumhan (GM), agus Gaeilge an Chaighdeáin Oifigiúil (CO).

Would anything be wrong with

Éireoidh an ghrian agus teilgfidh do chuid bruanna ?

"The sun will rise and [it will] fade your bruises"


Éireoidh an ghrian agus maoleoidh (???) sí do chuid bruanna.

Éireoidh an ghrian agus teilgfidh sí do chuid bruanna.


I'm not sure which verb is better.
But I think we need to connect the sun and the bruises directly.

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It is recommended that you always wait for three to agree on a translation.
I speak Connemara Irish, and my input will often reflect that.
I will do an mp3 file on request for short translations.
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In that case:

Éireoidh an ghrian agus maolóidh sí do chuid bruanna.

Éireoidh an ghrian agus teilgfidh sí do chuid bruanna.

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Múinteoir Gaeilge - Irish Teacher
My "specialty" is Connemara Irish, particularly Cois Fhairrge dialect, but I can also speak Ulster and Munster Irish with native-level pronunciation.
Is fearr Gaeilge ḃriste ná Béarla cliste, cinnte, aċ i ḃfad níos fearr aríst í Gaeilge ḃinn ḃeo na nGaeltaċtaí.
Gaeilge Chonnacht (GC), go háraid Gaeilge Chois Fhairrge (GCF), Gaeilic Uladh (GU), Gaelainn na Mumhan (GM), agus Gaeilge an Chaighdeáin Oifigiúil (CO).

teilgfear perhaps? More succinct and accurate I think. I'm not sure if that's the right spelling though. Same logic for maolóidh...maolfar.

Perhaps a little off track, but maybe also:

Is maith an leigheas ar do chuid gortuithe é éirí na gréine.

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Bí cinnte de go nglacfaidh triúr le gach aistriúchán a thabharfar.
Be sure to get three in agreement with a translation given.